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Tutor Feedback and Revision
02 March 2013
Feedback arrived this morning - and what a great way to start the day! My tutor wrote:
Overall I am very impressed with this assignment. So much so that it’s actually quite difficult to right a full feedback report about!
He suggested that together with what I demonstrated in the previous assignment, there appears to be both a theme and an approach worth developing for the final course assignment. What remains is to work out the details.
I'm psyched!
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31 August 2013
The tutor notes that the submission meets the technical requirements of the assignment. He recommends replacing four photos in order to create a more consistent conceptual approach. Specifically he believes a collection of store fronts would make an interesting typology.
Given that the original submission meets the technical criteria of the assignment, I see no need to revise anything therein and will let it stand as is. That does not mean, however, I am uninterested in the tutor’s advice, nor unaffected by his enthusiasm for my work. I have in the intervening months revised the project, which I append below. I suggest viewing it in sequence as a slideshow.
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